Shakia Boyack
Tuesday, August 9, 2011
Rate this poem please! be brutal as u want?
Uh. I dont mean to be harsh, burt ot was awful. I 'm sorry but it just sounded like you were trying to rhyme so hard.As if that only mattered and your grammar........ just try to revise it and i am sure you will nail it. Good luck!
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