How could I improve my Macbeth: Tyrant or Tragic Hero essay?

youre an amazing writer..the structure is perfect ! thats too weird because i just came home from my final english exam and we had to write an essay on the topic "macbeth is a beast" hahaha. my teacher always tells us that "less is more" and so the fewer words we can write to get the point across, the better. he would rather us write a 5 paragraph essay (1st, intro. 2nd,3rd and 4th are examples and details. 5th conclusion) but if your teacher doesnt expect that then keep doing what youre doing ! i enjoyed reading it a lot :)